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navi
post Nov 20 2009, 02:30 PM
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Are these sentence correct:
(The phrases after the comma are supposed to be after-thoughts. That's why there are commas.)

1-I read his latest book, about the new economic theories.

2-I bought a new pitcher, with a very strange handle.
(Meaning: I bought a new pitcher, which has a very strange handle.)


3-I bought an antique dagger, in a very nice scabbard.
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post Nov 22 2009, 10:24 AM
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QUOTE (navi @ Nov 20 2009, 02:30 PM) *
Are these sentence correct:
(The phrases after the comma are supposed to be after-thoughts. That's why there are commas.)

1-I read his latest book, about the new economic theories.

2-I bought a new pitcher, with a very strange handle.
(Meaning: I bought a new pitcher, which has a very strange handle.)


3-I bought an antique dagger, in a very nice scabbard.

(By the way, afterthought is not hyphenated.)

I think both sentences are correct/acceptable. In some contexts, the ellipsis symbol might communicate more effectively.

His prison sentence was 39 days ... plus life.


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